Showing posts with label people. Show all posts
Showing posts with label people. Show all posts

Sunday, November 20, 2011

Is Dialogue Really Necessary--part One

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Take a look at any group at a party. The people who do not speak are ignored. When people open their mouths and speak - it signal that they truly come to life. So dialogue in its simplest form is just a conversation between two or more people. It is just like the chats you hear and take part in every day. Nothing more threatening than that.

Dialogue scares new writers. They will do anything to avoid it – cross the street, move house, change their names. But you cannot run away from it forever. Dialogue must be faced and mastered if you ever hope to make it into print. Have you ever seen a published story that did not contain at least some dialogue? Normally we spend our lives talking to each other and we expect the characters who inhabit the stories we read to do the same. Then why is it so scary?

Correct me if I am wrong that the reason most new writers give is that, deep inside themselves, they are afraid to reproduce conversations that are real; that sound right. So how you would make characters speak like real people in your story? How do you pick up on each person’s individual mannerisms and unique speech patterns? Surely for new writers it is impossible – unless they are trained linguist who have the time to go round tape-recording conversations and analyzing them.

The good news is that you do not have to. In fact, it does not matter if your dialogue is not authentic, as long it sounds as though it might be. Dialogue is not an accurate representation of how people speak. It is a carefully selected series of words uttered by characters that pretend to be real people.

The purpose of dialogue is to put over vital information – about what is happening, how people feel, the tension of the situation or the background of the main characters. It puts over information in much the same way as your descriptions do. It tell the reader important facts and snippets of information he needs to know.

When you look at a story, you will see that the way the characters talk is not realistic at all. There are no ahs and ums, no woolly phrases or sentences that drift off at a tangent, no sentences left unfinished. Everything is clear, quick and clean.

Yes, dialogue is vital. Characters need to speak. They need to be heard – out loud. If you writer do not let your readers hear what the character thinks and feels out of his own mouth, he will remain forever a symbol – not a living, breathing, individual and your reader would not care about him or what happens to him. Dialogue brings the readers closer to the characters. A story without dialogue is boring. You writer is like summarizing only events rather than letting them unfold in real time. You will end up telling instead of showing!

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Sunday, October 23, 2011

Are You in Favor for Demonstrations and Rallies

Youth Fight For Jobs rallies in Victoria Park ...

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Mr. Jura had decided to join and lead a labor union. He had no idea that a catastrophic event was about to change his life. The new management of the company he worked with had taken over the former management - started reorganization and changed some of the company’s policies. Mr. Jura had worked for seven years as an accounts officer with the company.

The new management hired new personnel and employees. But on a certain account, they used cost – cutting procedure. They used to cut on the number of employees on a certain department. The company had introduced forced labor effectively. It affected to the old employees especially. They obliged their employees to do the jobs and responsibilities as the same as supervisors.

He explained, “I handled so many loan accounts, including monitoring, collections’ procedures, and other legal documentation. I could see that there were discrepancies. Promotions and salary increases were awarded and mostly enjoyed by the newly hired personnel. I have a pending promotion that the company had promised. The harmonious relationship between the employees and the employer had become chaotic. Favoritism had become obvious and the situation became worst.”

Those strategies that the company practiced had increased Mr. Jura’s desire to organize a labor union, of about two hundred members, with the primary objective of protecting the employees against the unfair labor practices of the company.

During his active Leadership – Mr. Jura noted that some of the union members were afraid to negotiate with the employer. He said, “There was a strong warning by the company, to terminate employees involved to such activity.” But despite the management cautionary action, the union stood its ground vigorously and there were more struggles. 

“I concluded two Collective Bargaining Agreements (CBA) with the employer. The first CBA had taken us by eight months to negotiate with the employer. In the middle of negotiation with the company, they offered me promotion and money. But I had never accepted it until it ended up with deadlocked bargaining. Those eight months of bargaining with the employer had brought us too much difficulty. I really needed the money to sustain my mother’s hospitalization and to support my family. It was really hard for me to handle the situation. But this had not affected my strong desire to lead the union. But it was difficult to render a visible protest against the company’s unfair labor practices,” he said.

The plans on a Yes – to – Strike. The union members wore arm – bands with slogans, and had picketed in front of the administration’s building. It took them a month. But the company still did not alter its decision. They felt that their crusade had failed. Their struggles seemed to have no success. These were months of desolation. It affected Mr. Jura greatly. That period of his crusade with the union had made him crippled. His mother’s condition had affected him. The agony had penetrated his heart, brought by the disturbing events, but he had never deviated from his decision. Courageously, they have said, ‘Yes to strike,’ through a consultation with the Department of Labor Employment (DOLE). 

The plans on a Yes – to – Strike by the union had worried the company. So the company bribed one of the employees of DOLE to release an assumption order to stop the possible strike of the union. But the union went through with their crusade that urged the company to grant some of their demands. 

In that provision, all employees, either union members or non – union members will receive 3% profit shares from the company’s annual income.

According to Mr. Jura, the first and second distributions were in good faith, while the third time of distribution was shocking. They found that the non – members received a greater amount than the union members. This urged Mr. Jura to request a consultation with the management, but to no avail. The management justified it as their prerogative. This made the union open their second CBA. 

Their second CBA with the company was not as fruitful. Their legal counsel (union) had renewed some of the existing provisions stated in the CBA. The management (company) bribed their counsel with some money.

“We continued our struggles. We filed the case with the National Labor Counsel. The issue was for equal profit sharing. Luckily, we won the case, after two long years of labor hearings!” he said. 

Mr. Jura felt jubilation to win the case. He never sold his principle and dignity to the company. He would cherish it throughout his life span and share it to his kids. He resigned from his job with dignity and pride. He said, “Courage and Unity were the best weapons to Victory.” 

“It was really difficult to handle the situation. I lost my job. I have a family that needed my support. Those disturbing events that happened to me did not diminish my strength and willingness to live and survive, but I strive more to keep on living,” said Mr. Jura.

He added, “If it happened to you and you lost your job come down and never get mad. It is not the end of the world for you. There are more opportunities for you to find a job. Jobs are there just around you. Think positively. Don’t just put yourself in a corner, remembering those bad experiences that happened to you before. Maintain a good relationship with your family. Trust and understanding are really needed in this situation. 

“Your family is your outlet to discuss what is good. See your friends. They are willing to help you. They can refer you to another company that needs your services. Deliver yourself to the Good Lord. He is always behind you to support you, to guide you. He is the first and the last to seek for help because hope is there.”

At present Mr. Jura is working as a Secretary at a Construction Company in the Kingdom of Saudi Arabia.

It is said that Demonstrations and Rallies are adding to the fear of investors depriving ourselves of the investments needed to kick-start the economy but they also help to check our officials wrong doings!

This article was written with the permission from Mr. Jura.

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Wednesday, September 28, 2011

April 29 is My Birth Day and The Wedding Day of Prince William of Great Britain and His Future Queen Ms. Kate Middleton

Published on Socyberty, Apr 15, 2011 Category – People

On that day, April 29, 1960, I was born at around 11:00AM and that was Friday. Last April 29, 2011, also Friday – the most awaited wedding of Prince William of Great Britain and Ms. Catherine "Kate" Middleton took place.

I was born under the constellation of the zodiac Taurus - in English name it is the Bull. In Chinese Zodiac, I was born under the year of the Rat or the year of the Mouse. In broadly meaning the Rat or Mouse is also called Rodent. Last April 29, 2011, I was exactly 51-year old.

Prince William was born a famous left hander. He was born on June 21, 1982 under the constellation zodiac Cancer – in English name it is the Crab. In Chinese Zodiac, Prince William was born under the year of the Dog (25 January 1982 – 12 February 1983). On his wedding day, he was exactly 28-year old, 10 months and 8 days.

Ms. Catherine ”Kate” Middleton was born on January 9, 1982 under the constellation zodiac Capricorn – in English name it is the Sea-goat. In Chinese Zodiac, Ms. Kate Middleton was born under the year of the Rooster (Feb 05, 1981 – Jan 24, 1982). On her wedding day, she was exactly 29-year old, 3 months and 20 days. She is 5 months and 12 days older than Prince William on their wedding day.

Friday is considered the day of Venus – the Roman goddess of love and beauty. And it is also believed that it is the lucky day for sowing the seed!

 

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Wednesday, September 21, 2011

The Significance of Roy G. Biv to People

Rainbow Valley

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Published on Socyberty, Mar 22, 2011 Category - People

Who is Roy G. Biv? What is his significance to people lives, history, culture and beliefs? How old is he?

He is the most loved of all times but he is untouchable. He exists through out the different ages of times. He can influence our actions and emotions. He signifies peace and hope, orderliness, energy, creativity, harmony, wisdom and inspiration. 

He has no sexuality. He is abusively used as a vital subject for scientific studies about the significance of colors; in culture and mythology as in history, phenomenon and beliefs; in music – many singers and composers used him for their professions and careers; in arts – many artists used him on their paintings; in literature – he inspires the metaphor and simile and in other imaginable ideas that people may come to create and enjoy.

He can be expressed in many ways such as Richard Of York Gave Battle In Vain that refer to the defeat and death of Richard, Duke of York at the Battle of Wakefield, Rowntrees of York Gave Best in Value and Read Out Your Good Book In Verse.

He is the acronym or the mnemonic name of the seven beautiful colors found when the rain and bow are  together – which was believed as a sign of the sacred agreements between God and Noah said that the terrestrial life would never again be destroyed by flood.

And for bloggers and other writers, he is the unending source of ideas too to write for awesome articles!

 

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